In the Eye of a Raven
In the Eye of a Raven I float high above a sparkling red quartz canyon. A rushing river gushes over rocks below me with white foam. The river forms a silver thread tying the land together. With my...
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Frizzi, thanks my friend for reading my strange tale. I appreciate it much. ;-)~ XOXO John
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enjoyed the descriptive nature of this john. it's like the reader is there as the raven, experiencing each scene vividly lorr
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Loved your interpretation of this Lorr my friend. I'm glad it took you into the raven's sensory perceptions. That is what I was striving for. ;-)~ XOXOXO John
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Nice write, John....felt more like a dream...*Smile* But then, I've always had strange dreams like that...
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Thanks Talitha. This was a kind of dream write. However, I didn't dream it while sleeping. It was an imaginative exercise. Glad you enjoyed. ;) John
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is why I love reading you John....you come up with the neatest things and write them so wonderfully...I really enjoy it all!!! *needs to come in here more lol*
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Di, I love to hear from you. You have the greatest comments. You rub me so well with your warm words. ;) XOXOXO John
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Willowdown glad you enjoyed my prose fantasy. Thank you for your lovely comment. :) John
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